Empty Feeling Down Deep Inside Poem by David Harris

Empty Feeling Down Deep Inside

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Sometimes we get an empty feeling
down deep inside of us
that we are so alone,
no friends, and no family.
We know it isn’t so,
but that empty feeling,
it still remains to taunt us.
Why we’ll never know.
We could be in a crowded room
and that feeling still resides.
You know that you are not alone,
but you still feel that
empty feeling down deep inside.

18 February 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Atina 15 March 2008

David, Feeling empty and lonely is as universal as the emotion of love - and you've tapped into this rich tapestry with inimitable style Cheers Anita

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Yup...i confess...been there too...in fact been there three or four or more! I think'll go back to sleep, now & have weird dreams...lol! Excellent Work, David! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Yup...i confess...been there too...in fact been there three or four or more! I think'll go back to sleep, now & have weird dreams...lol! Excellent Work, David! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Poignant penning D. Only, sometimes, the feeling IS true. t x

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 March 2008

Emptyness is a lonley place, without some one to fill the space with loving grace.. Andy 10

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