Empty Poem by Min Sia
Empty
Every night the moon shines,
But the nest was silent and sad.
Through your tears breaks a blinding light,
Birthing a dawn to this endless night.
Do you remember me lost for so long?
Will you be with me or will you forget all?
Arms outstretch, longing, waiting,
An open embrace upon a bleeding tree.
I try to kill the pain but only brought more.
I look at the mirror and I see no one.
I search deeply and regain faith,
Still, no shadow of creature..no motion of life.
Your imagery is splendid. You weave such wonderful visuals; it is almost impossible for others to emulate. you are my discovery; 10
vivid imagery..creative verses..a great poem...thumbs-up 10 Ency Bearis
Why all eyes are teary, why all heart are empty, Why on this earth all sings painful ditty. Good work. Hit 10
heartfelt..! touchy....! fine imagery.....! A+ and 10+++++++
the blankness of the night will soon fade away and smiling sun will put his rays on you...10 from me
Night ensures emptiness to few & they crawl on the paper with crying pen. Absolute poetry.10++++
beautufull dear sweet poet.. give us more, you still have a lot.. thank you.. hazem
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cooollll...! ! ! i like it...! ! ! so deep and touch...! ! ! i like the word 'no motion of life' its kinnda strange but strong...