Empty Poem by Samantha Cox

Empty

Rating: 4.5


empty
I wish it did not hurt
I wish we made it work.
many times i ask myself why
every second trying not to cry.
I wish i could die an end this pain
but what would i gain.
No one will see me different or that i can change.
To be alone with every acking bone
I cant make it on my own....
A pretty mask i can wear an no one will see a tear.
I cant speak clear, i can hardly breath knowing
i deserve to bleed

Sunday, February 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 01 March 2015

Love is an experience that affects the mind with a spiritual force, and its effects lingers long after the source of stimulation is gone. It is whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning, even after careful nurturing by one of the couples. Love needs care nurturing and commitment by both couples to maintain its bliss. I like the articulation and insight of the piece. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 February 2015

Many times I ask myself why do I cry but get emptiness and no answer. Wonderful poem shared on.

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