Empty Poem by Mina Lotfi

Empty

Rating: 4.3


A gape in my mind
I read just some pages
Play words sonnet,
Rhythm of being
Reading is my habit
My mind outbreak
Maybe someone running,
Through
Through my wet mind

Friday, January 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 23 December 2015

Rhythm of being outbreak of the mind someone running through the wet mind.# great poetic expressions. you are gifted with imagination. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Mina Lotfi 12 August 2023

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Unknown Spirit 01 September 2016

reading gives to soul such tranquility and make the soul to fly on the wings of wisdom. it is a journey to self. thank dear lotfi for sharing your beautiful poem.

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fatemeh zolfagharian 18 July 2022

Very nice

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 March 2020

Art there is empty there is mty there is mt oh but the Art full with wisdom because it's human ruining mind and running mind is the life of nature

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 December 2017

Play words sonnet, Rhythm of being... some one running through my wet mind. so fine and poetic verses.... full of imagination......... thank you dear poetess. tony

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Mina Lotfi 12 August 2023

Thanks 🙏

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Messaoud Allalouche 31 August 2017

very nice small poem I like it very much

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Howard Mcdougal 17 April 2017

I thought provoking read thank you for sharing your fine work

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Mina Lotfi 12 August 2023

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