Emptiness Poem by Mamta Agarwal

Emptiness

Rating: 5.0


Why smile?
some one died.
who...?
I

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 29 July 2009

WOW! ! ! clever expression! Yes! we feel sometimes we are dying when we feel emptiness inside our heart.......Thanks! ! ! loved it!

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Rakesh Bedi 30 July 2009

A nice play of words, mamta. But, i think death brings fulfillment, completeness to an unknown void within; to re-start ones journey with the karmic balance brought forward!

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Sandra Martyres 30 July 2009

A very provocative piece Mamta.....open to different interpretations

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 July 2009

As Sandra said this is a very provocative piece. Some time back my friend enquired about my health. In my poor Hindi I sent him a SMS Doctor ne kaha, davaa badalthe dostne kaha doctor ko badal do lekin mai soch rahaa hu kyo na badan ko badal doo Correct my Hindi, if I'm wrong.....

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Siddharth Singh 11 August 2009

concised, yet magnanimous in its premise. Astounding, really.

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 August 2009

hey this one is really amusing.. I mean nice, clever and different.... cheers! ! shan

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Subroto Chatterjee 05 August 2009

With poetic liberty, may.....turn this on its head: I who...? some one died. Why smile? I'm that person - reincarnated. Fullness. Cheers. Subroto

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Kesav Easwaran 02 August 2009

who smiled? someone asked why? died... thanks...10

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premji premji 01 August 2009

your windows open to absolute freedom... laugh and rejoise..........

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