Emptiness- 1 Poem by Green Peace

Emptiness- 1

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pleasure --- delight ---- happiness---
all around celebration
and yet this haunting emptiness----
void--- incompetency ---- loneliness ---
among crowded hordes of myriad mass
why this incompetence?
this lacking glory?
this depression, demoralisation, despair----
the unknown mystical melancholy that drowns the soul---
that cannot dare raise its ugly head up again
raise it upwards!
to the highest level
to bask in the celestial aura
of Eternal, Heavenly, Blissful Ecstasy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aijaz Asif 14 February 2009

bravo, bravo a very beautiful and strong write and so true, ifeel the sameway and mostly ask myself these questions...thanks 10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 December 2008

Today I read Vaibhav Pandey's similar poem. Why, how, when, whre are beautiful questions; they take u into ur own interiors; where lives..........HE....................Real real exploration indeed........10

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