Emoiticon's Relation Poem by Pratikshya Sedhain

Emoiticon's Relation

Rating: 2.8


People who talk too much,
wants to crate a secrecy pouch.
People who easily start crying,
are encouraged not to do trying.

People who reach peak point,
can't create a loving joint.
People living a normal life,
can have a wonderful wife.

People who can control emotion,
have much more successful relation.
People who can't control emotion,
have too much poor relation.

Frustration is covering emoticon's mind,
some people even forgot what was their kind.
The great enemy of life is aggression,
It can even kill the prettiest relation.

Monday, August 26, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 26 August 2013

great enemy is aggression, tight, good poem. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Sekharan Pookkat 25 September 2013

good observation-i like it

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 11 February 2016

A nice write about love life and relationship.Like it.

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Rajesh Natamsha 13 February 2015

Logical poem! Thank you! The great enemy of life is aggression, It can even kill the prettiest relation.

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Pratikshya Sedhain 03 October 2013

Thank you Mr.Abhishek Kumar..............

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Abhishek Mishra 28 September 2013

Superb write..loved it: -) i would rate it 10/10

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Pratikshya Sedhain 26 September 2013

Thank you both Sekharan Sir n Gajanan sir.............

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