Emo Love Poem by Hali Curtis

Emo Love

Rating: 4.6


Love is deep,
Mysterious and sweet.
Scars of the past,
are to real to last.

pain is only part of love,
but I hide in a building like a small black dove.
This pain inside is far too real,
so instead I'll take this small peice of steel,

I mean what I say,
but it is still true today.
This is sad but still true.
So I'm in my room still missing you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jorydan Gap 07 January 2008

love it im a give to my bestest friend cuz hes mad at me

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Alan Curtis 27 October 2007

I still havent found out why some kids these days think it is enjoyable 2 cut themselves.Just one of the new trends in the 21st century I guess. But I like the rhyming though. For a girl who thinks shes Emo! : (

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... Lynch 09 October 2007

Awesome poem Hali, a ten from me. It's seems sweet and honest but also holds raw emotion. I also like your rhyming, and can relate well. Highly enjoyed. -Kylie M. Lynch

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Flame6203E . 11 September 2007

i agree with nothing hurts like love this poem is full of meaning really deep

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Madly In Love 07 September 2007

Hali this poem is awesome I love it good write, I can't wait to read more of ur work

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Hali Curtis

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las vegas, Nevada
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