Emily Poem by Will Barber

Emily

Rating: 4.9


All in the evenings, sweet Emily
Would walk by the water's edge, dreaming
Of a voice that might wake her forever
From such idle revery.
She trampled grasses down,
So blindly did she stride, musing
On the destination of the wind,
The sequence of history.

All days, in every season, Emily
Would walk to the river's edge, wondering
Whether she might not care to be
Part of the river's legacy
To the city of New Orleans.


1980

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Daly 24 September 2006

I like this a lot Will, it has a tenderness to it that drenches each line. The flow is gorgeousand dreamlike. I think that the last line is outstanding. The poem ceases to be about an individual and alters into a communal spirit.

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Sandra Fowler 24 September 2006

Sadness is pervasive in this fragile and beautiful poem. Very touching, Will. Your poetess friend, Sandra

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Moon Batchelder 02 October 2006

very beautiful in a haunting sort of feel...glad to have found your poetry

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 05 October 2006

Loved this one Will... beautifully visionary

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Tailor Bell 22 October 2006

this is quite haunting especially now. excellent, moving work. -Tailor

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Luis Gil 31 March 2009

I see Ophelia in your Emily. Ophelia before drowning, insane in love.... Hamlet could have never been brave enough, if Ophelia hadn´t killed herself.

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Uriah Hamilton 24 February 2009

This is a beautiful poem, the flow worthy of our Emily Dickinson!

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John Tiong Chunghoo 27 September 2007

yes why trample? good poem though.

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Ana Monnar 09 September 2007

Beautifully stated. I loved your poem very much.

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Duncan Wyllie 10 November 2006

This is another great write Will, what did you have for breakfast, sounds like we should all be eating it! Love duncan X

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