Farah Ilyas

Rookie - 12 Points (10 12 1987 / Faisalabad, Pakistan)

Elucidation


In your hour of need.
Who is whimpering?
Who is swindling?
Who is accompanying?
Don’t be judgemental!
It’s all elucidation of time.
If perpetrator have an eye on his wickedness;
Everyone would be good:
Then crime will be committed by whom?
Differences exist in all eras.
It’s all elucidation of time.
If everyone has piece of mind;
Then
Who would be deprived?
Who would be shined (blessed?)
This is what? fixture of nature and
It’s all elucidation of time
All objects must be sovereignty of mine.
Oh man! What actuality of yours & what desire of thine.
Nothing were yours, nothing would be mine.
It’s all elucidation of time.
Callous veracity in a glass of wine;
Take a sip of it
Or
Put it on the ground
Decision would be thine.

Submitted: Wednesday, May 22, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 37,706 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/19/2013 10:56:00 AM)

    very nice Farah this poem is well compose in a onomatopoeic diction (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (6/14/2013 5:02:00 PM)

    powerful deep poem
    good work
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Shiny Princess (6/3/2013 7:24:00 AM)

    Woooooooooww gorgeous, so touching I love it keep on teacher lol (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,441 Points Dave Walker (6/2/2013 5:54:00 PM)

    Powerful and really makes you think.
    A fantastic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,278 Points Tajudeen Shah (6/1/2013 1:26:00 PM)

    Well, to me, it is not just 'elucidation of time', ... Time has definite, destined missions immortal to keep engaged for ever more. Fleeting human life and its affairs are but light flakes of oblivion. Peeping sharp into the blessed verses of the Holy Quran and a few supporting lines from Respected Allama Iqbal, as orated by Abdul Samad Samadani, Time has such relevance immortal! Comparisons that leads to contrasts and agreements. Wonderfully penned. God Bless, would love to read more when time permits and express my version of thoughts for your attention. Regards. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (6/1/2013 12:49:00 PM)

    If perpetrator have an eye on his wickedness;
    Everyone would be good:
    Then crime will be committed by whom? , , , ,

    If everyone has piece of mind;
    Then
    Who would be deprived?
    Who would be shined (blessed?)

    It’s all elucidation of time
    SO TRUE THINGS YOU JUST SAID, , , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 603 Points Shahzia Batool (5/30/2013 2:37:00 PM)

    A sudden check the reader receives from this poem when this line comes /Decision would be thine./ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,147 Points Thomas A Robinson (5/27/2013 2:03:00 AM)

    Elucidation ... a pinpoint of time. Everyone has their time and everyone has their explanation for that time.
    And everyone is a second on that clock and there are billions of seconds on each minute of that clock.
    All with their elucidation or explanation for being or having something at that exact point of time. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (5/25/2013 7:47:00 PM)

    The directness of thought can catch the readers' mind easily.Loved. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (5/25/2013 9:25:00 AM)

    Time is a great reality of this whole universe. You see everything in the callous veracity of Time....glass of wine is a good metaphor. a well-written piece (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (5/24/2013 3:48:00 AM)

    truth well told....your poems always contain massage which i love the most....the one that makes you think that is thought....a great write mam brilliant........... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,022 Points Unwritten Soul (5/23/2013 12:24:00 PM)

    Hard to elucidate when it is untold, predict still fine... just let feeling tells and elucidate what it was but what it will have? not so sure...elucidation is secret revelation of time and knowledge...if we know both we can do all_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (5/22/2013 6:27:00 PM)

    It's all up to us, isn't it? an elucidation of time. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (5/22/2013 12:58:00 PM)

    the ending is super.. i enjoyed it fully, blasting in the following line..Nothing were yours, nothing would be mine.
    It’s all elucidation of time.
    Callous veracity in a glass of wine;
    Take a sip of it
    Or
    Put it on the ground
    Decision would be thine. (Report) Reply

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