Elliptical Love Poem by Lento Maez

Elliptical Love

Rating: 4.5


Some relationships are elliptical
Difficult to understand at best
They can make one crazy
Putting your senses to the test

Yet try as you may there is no way
One can decipher the senders sense
You cannot always be on the defense

The tried and true response is to
Let that love go if it’s really true
Then it will come back to you

Monday, March 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 31 March 2014

The poem speaks of elliptical relationships, with an apt title- 'Elliptical Love', but the poem itself is not elliptical. Very nice and well done! 'Let that love go if it’s really true Then it will come back to you' - An old adage reconfirmed.

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Nika Mcguin 31 March 2014

This reminds me of the song In My Mind by Heather Headly. She says something similar If you love something you've got to let it go and if it comes back then it means so much more

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