Ejection Seat Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Ejection Seat

Rating: 5.0


Show sign of repentance
Be aware of the fleet
Before a hard landing
Use your ejection seat!

(2008/5/30)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 30 May 2008

Use your ejection seat in a flash, safety first; avoid this crash ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 May 2008

Authenthic sacrifices don't show your repentance but shows your redundance shouts and says Banzai! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Lynda Robson 30 May 2008

Very astute Persian, wouldn't it be useful to have an ejection seat when things got a bit awkward,10 for this, Lynda xx

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~ Jon London ~ 30 May 2008

Stunning as always Persian my friend, you really do have your very own edge, that's what makes you a cut above many a poet. best wishes *10*

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M M 30 May 2008

An interesting poem, with a new kind of imagery here which leaves place to multiple interpretations, and still, which relates to much deep thoughts. 'Be aware of the fleet' seeming to me the most important point in this poem... Very well done! 10

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