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Remember the first poem I sent you
Well, I have made a few changes
I’ve swapped some lines around
Deleted a number of words
Introduced new ones
The first line has become
The main title
I’ve since replaced “strength”
With “madness”
It seemed more appropriate
Sunday, November 19, 2006
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4/19/2024 9:40:27 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Nice write. It makes me curious to know what the first poem said.