Sofia Darling

Edge Of Your Skin - Poem by Sofia Darling

Just rip me up
and climb inside
inject me with
what makes you high.
Take a deep breath
then fill me up
and now its something
more then love.
There's some kind of light
at the end
when you touch
the edge of my skin.

Once so hard to speak
now so easily done
that eyes that pierced me once
and i am hypnotized.
Your words they pour
like children to the playground
i am drinking what you have
making that soft sound.
Its the feeling you get
that makes me sweat
this some kinda of day dream i'll never forget
and there's some kind of light
at the end
drinking the stuff that you bred
and touching the edge of your skin.

Comments about Edge Of Your Skin by Sofia Darling

  • Rookie Aria Siren (4/25/2013 1:31:00 PM)

    So good!
    The first four lines are beyond amazing and they pulled me in so fast I felt like I crashed at the end of the poem. But maybe that was your intent. You seem to have the skill of not only telling a story but taking your readers on the ride with you. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Luke Summers (1/29/2012 5:22:00 PM)

    Wow I really like this one. It most indefinitely targets a subject of fauls love for me. Bravo!
    inject me with
    what makes you high. - Amazing lines! It gave me a really chill. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Virginia Pecho Gely (1/2/2012 2:22:00 PM)

    A poem delightfully romantic...Is the poet in love? My senses have been freshen-up just in reading this one...This poem is a water in a desert without love. A fantastic master piece.
    Thanks Sofia Darling for sharing. Virginia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pete Rivera (11/4/2011 4:53:00 PM)

    Wow..this is really good =) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Katelin Offord Harper (11/1/2011 10:31:00 PM)

    this a wonderful poem so good so beautiful great job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dan-sambo Zubairu Maikudi (8/10/2011 11:38:00 AM)

    An intensely emotional poem. I like the evocation of movement and the ideas associated with it.More ink to the pen! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 9, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 1, 2012

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