Eden Poem by TIMOTHY KNIGHT HILL

Eden



Once there was a garden named Eden
I lived happily there
I lived as Adam
She was my beautiful Eve
But something invaded the garden
It Had a terrible name
It had a hideous face
It attacked my precious Eve
I had no defense
No sword would kill
No shield would protect
It tortured and took away my heart Eve
Helpless
Hopeless
How is a man to feel when he can't protect the one he loves
The thoughts of pink ribbons make me sick
The garden of Eden is no more

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My late wife died of breast cancer commercialization people making money charities that are supposed to help only see this disease as an opportunity to line their pockets please give to charities but see where your money is being used. And my wife was much more than her disease. Pink ribbons for me only serve to remind me of this terrible monster cancer.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Baker 22 August 2017

Tragic.. Stunning poetry, so deeply touching now is time to find the formless eden I sent you a prayer...May our spirit, blossom and bloom and bear fruit, In the formless Eden, of The Living God.. prayer hearts plea.. I am so deeply sorry for your pain, your loss and suffering..God Bless Patricia Ann and you...johanna x

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Allotey Abossey 07 August 2015

My condolences dear poet... In all things God is faithful. Stay blessed

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