Eclipse Poem by lady grace

Eclipse

Rating: 5.0


cast a shadow on the sky
sun will hug the moon quietly
over the rainbow and the raindrops
moon rests in his arms silently...

today December 15 Philippine time
an eclipse will be noticed from here
i can see again how sun kisses her gently
as she always promise to come every year...

at past 3 they'll meet again
at the sky of blue and gray
where many beautiful creatures waiting below
to witness how sun wraps moon in a unique way...

how warm he accepts their acquaintance
where moon submits her undying charm
he gives his all strength light and energy
to warm his energrtic loving beautiful lady...

as they move in the axis of their life
where two hearts meet and depart
everyday they shine giving hope
to every nation religion or groups...

today as they meet and kiss once more
exposing heat revealing flames of love
again a promise has not been broken
that tomorrow after a year they meet again…



eclipse will be noticed here at 3: 16pm philippine time december 15,2010.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

eclipse eh. you described it well. I have seen a few in my time. when the day goes dark.... lovely but frightening at times too. :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2010

today as they meet and kiss once more exposing heat revealing flames of love again a promise has not been broken that tomorrow after a year they meet again..................overshadowing is not good it amounts to encroachment but it is natural phenomenon and taking place almost in unspecified timings...lovely scene to observe it from distance....10 read mine, , sun eclipse

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Ken E Hall 15 January 2010

Luvli way to express love indeed the moon is our emblem of love and the sun hugs the moon in the Eclipse......honeymoon? very well narrated Lady G thanks regards

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Mohammed Hassan 15 January 2010

an optimistic view of the eclipse i like it you are a romance lady thanks for sharing 10++++++++

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Akram Awadat 28 January 2010

wow, very nice poem again thanks a lot for the beautiful lines

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 25 January 2010

Beautiful poem of nature doing what it always does...living naturally.Wouldn't it be just as beautiful if human could live in harmony with nature instead of trying to control nature. Thanks for sharing my joy!

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Ency Bearis 17 January 2010

a passionate poem..descriptive and a simile..well presented.. a brilliant write....10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 January 2010

how warm he accepts their acquaintance where moon submits her undying charm he gives his all strength light and energy to warm his energrtic loving beautiful lady.....................ingenious write of love portrayed though celestial bodies , so love is a universal phenomenon even yet reflected through nature by bountiful beauty, love is yet so attractive yet sun and moon being to each other even spatially apart by distances, wonderful imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

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John Knight 15 January 2010

This is a lovely poem about one of Mother Nature's lovliest natural phenomena an ECLIPSE. V 1 The Sun & Moon have a wonderful relationship like a Groom and his Bride. The Moon is loving and submissive and her Glory shines at night when the Glory of the Sun is veiled. But the Moon's glory is the reflected glory of her Beau the Sun (V 4) . V 2 In Creation God gave the Sun & Moon pecise dimensions and precise locations in the Universe in relation to Planet Earth - which is God's chosen planet in our galaxy. Their dimensions and distance from the Earth ensures that in a TOTAL ECLIPSE the SUN is exactly covered by the MOON. V 3 - This gives the beautiful 'diamond ring' effect as the moon move away from the Sun - which if you witness it stays in your heart for ever. This effect is a sure proof of the betrothal between these two Celestial Bodies. V 5 The Human Race has always had a very high regard for the Sun & Moon which are objects of worship in some religions. V 6 When Man set foot on the Moon in 1969 'One small leap for a Man - one giant leap for Mankind' it did not diminish her Glory but enhanced it. Sceintific research has shown her to be a real Lady - beautiful - powerful - unearthly - elusive - enigmatic. Let us honour two of God's greatest gifts to all of mankind Brother Sun & Sister Moon - 'Today as they meet and kiss once more - exposing heat revealing flames of love - again a promise has not been broken - that tomorrow after a year they meet again'. AWESOME & BEAUTIFUL Poem and Poet. Thank you for sharing your vision it scores a MAX (Ten) . Love you lots in Poetry - JOHN

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