Echoing Poem by Selina Gurgacz

Echoing

Rating: 5.0


echoing.
voices echoing,
in this impossibly dark room.
echoing.
voices echoing,
echoing words that are not understood,
by people,
stuck in a labyrinth,
trying to get out.
echoing.
voices echoing.
directions that only confuse,
the forlorn people

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 09 November 2007

I like this one Selina. The repetition of the word echoing evokes the sound you seek to express and the melancholic nature of the piece is not overblown. 'Forlorn people.' is great. Cool poem. love, Allie xxxx

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