Eaten Alive Poem by Bruce Kadzviti

Eaten Alive

Rating: 5.0


shall i pretend that we are alright
when i dwell in the shadow of the night
something is stealing our peace
something is killing us please
if the cause is of my doing
tell me rather to give me this feeling
i'd rather die from guilty and shame
than from something without a name
do not deny me the chance
to mend my mistake but once
for how long shall i dwell in wonder
while we are being torn assunder
i am being eaten alive by suspence
do not continue to watch me in silence

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Nothing destroys our loved ones so easily than to give them a cold shoulder and not tell them why.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Words' Knight 25 September 2012

this a beautifull poem, and i loved it so much, cuz it's full of honeeest feelings and well expressed thought.go on and thank you for sharing with us your poem.

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