Earth In Universe Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Earth In Universe

Rating: 5.0


Universe, when I watched in a map,
Doesn't has a point to show,
Our planet the big one, we know,
An arrow has been trying to trap.

Our sun and its system, fine, descent,
We know and see them all,
But the system is so much small,
A point couldn't represent.

Instead, I found written there,
I was sad and grieved to see,
In the great Milky Way, where are we,
Our Solar System, somewhere here.

Do the humans have anything
To raise their rating in universe?
Our acts, our thinking, all adverse,
Need to think and do something.

Limited resources, rising population,
Shortage of water, weapons of war,
Might is right, our ideal so far,
Proceeding we are towards destruction.

Why not use resources and wealth,
To look a planet, in the space,
To save our planet, to save our face,
To shift our people relieving the earth.

Help yourselves and help all,
Loving, pleasant and descent,
Make the earth significant,
Love every one, big or small.

Saturday, March 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Having watched a 3d map of the universe.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2016

Need to think and do something to help Mother Earth! Nice work.

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Khalid Saifullah 11 September 2015

A nice message..........................................

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Khalida Bano Ali 02 February 2015

A wonderful poem......................10

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Biplab Singha 29 March 2014

a great actualization of life in your poem. thank you great!

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