Earth And Men Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Earth And Men

Rating: 5.0


i am earth
i see with
lenses in
the men

my blood
runs in them

the trees
they are
hair on
my skin

such
bright greenery
once

but i have
been naughty
shaving it
here, there
everywhere
to give myself
a smoother look

planting things
in their place
to make me
feel good
look good
trying
all things
hoping
to gain
immortability

now, have i
been wrong?

i see
the sky
growing
darker

a part
of me
lacerates
soon
to disfigure
me

blood
running
down
my physique

part
of my
skin
turning
so dry
it cracks

and the men
the men
and my eyes -
they would see
no more!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raynette Eitel 30 June 2006

Another one of your cosmic poems, John...and well done. Raynette

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***** ********* 30 June 2006

Good One! does not sum up this poem up at all John, it is stunningly brilliant, read out loud especially, your line breaks build the tension perfectly and the Apocolytic outcome is intensely felt in it's ending. Excellent work, we should all go al Naturale ie stop shaving and rather start feeding and detoxing the body of our planet earth instead. Thank you so much for sharing your exquisite talent, Smiling at you, Tai

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Aashish Ameya 30 June 2006

very futuristic...good one

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