Treasure Island

Theodora (Theo) Onken

(Washington State)

((( Early Eve Of Remember)))


It t'was in the early eve of Remember---
Before twilight had come around...
Where i found you with a basket of love so true...
And in the air t'was a melody of new loves sweet sound! ;

You held me oh so very close--
Before the dusk cast its nightly cover...
Before the ebons velveteen sky...
Declared you-to be my forever lover! ;

'Neath the comforter of a diamond studded sky...
Together we embraced in this blanket of night--
So cozy we two-touched by the nights glistening dew...
Two brillant silouettes under the moon shining so bright;

Oh such a magical moment in time -for us....darling--
Before the twilight t'was even near...
Before the dusk finally cast its sheltering cover...
You became mine forever-my dear! ;

It t'was in the early eve of Remember...
Before twilight had come around---
Where i found you with a basket of love so true--
And in the air t'was a melody of new loves sweet sound! ;

May 29,2010

Dedicated to: RAW Hijackers

Submitted: Saturday, May 29, 2010

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  • Roseann Shawiak (10/19/2013 1:14:00 AM)

    Beautiful depiction of sharing love under the stars. Reminded me of one of my own memories, long ago. Thank you for sharing and bringing back my memory as well. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (9/4/2013 7:17:00 AM)

    A very beautiful and passionate write. A starry night is a most
    magnificent sight made even more lovelier when two lovers
    meet together and bask in each other under the stars. Enjoyed
    this one. (Report) Reply

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