Early Days ***** Native Air Poem by Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

Early Days ***** Native Air

Rating: 3.5


(my childhood poem)

Native air is mighty
mighter than the sea
he contents my breath
from nature's life
brings comfort
in twice delight

I hear murmuring leaves
from tress, the shade-giver
fresh fume and scent they offer
showered by native air

days of life
will pass away
even how we use to care
in ephemeral moments
live happily
breath native air

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pink Poozle 12 April 2009

Its ok, not as good as your over poems, but well done! I gave you a 8. :)

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Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

a.k.a. Jetfellow Marchanism
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