Early Date Poem by Yen Cress

Early Date

Rating: 4.3


She rises bright as sunrise floods
Her Grandma's garden tangle
To meet her friends out near the walk
Where fuschia blossoms dangle.

She peeks around the corner with
A shy anticipation,
And San Francisco's pigeons hear
Her gentle invitation.

'Come here and eat, sweet things, ' she coos,
And they accept, unscorning,
The crumbs dropped from her little hands-
A banquet in the morning.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 21 September 2007

cute - fluid; not heavy on the rhymes to weigh down your verse. keep on, sjg

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