(e) 6 (Dark) Inside My Love, Die! ! Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
(e) 6 (Dark) Inside My Love, Die! !
A deep dark night
Clutching like a parasite
Strange dark woods
Throwing its hoods
Refusing to let go
Howling winds blow
Threatening whirlpools
Demons rule
Tentacles and vines
circle and entwine
your dark mind
Raging tempest
Anguished quest
Died a thousand deaths
Trying to set love on the breath
Deep cloud cover
O seething lover
Dont burn so bright
In your own light
Slide out from the side
Do it now
Before you die
Run, escape
Before you get raped
By your own mind
Thats made you blind
With its simmering steam
can hear your soul scream
Soar up to the sky
Along the length of my thigh
Wings of your fancy and fly
Up, up, high, high
Join me inside
Inside my love, Die.....
With so much happening in this poem, it worth dying this death. Excellent narration of burining in love before the naughty and real death.
I would love to know the poet's mind while writing this one.... this is hauntingly beautiful!
It's so not YOU! It's like you're exploring new styles with each poem, a true mark of a poet! abstraction at its best! Preets
A nice slice of the abstract side from our resident OCEAN....i like this very much....ias i myself delve heavilyinto contemporary abstract verse...The mystery & surreal mystique that abounds this piece is inventive and mind-aural...A fINE PENNING ONCE AGAIN, MY GOOD FRIEND, T. O.! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''frank/fjr
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 12:36:15 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Wow......this is a real sizzler of a poem....and well skripted if I do say...... well done TO............................