Dying I Enter My Home Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

Dying I Enter My Home

Rating: 4.8


On the white sands of the shore
There a came a wave
It came up to my feet,
touched my feet
and washed it.

Receding,
it gave me
the bubbles and white foam
dying instantly
as it joined the mighty sea.

The sea is my home.
By dying to the shore
I enter my home.

Dying I Enter My Home
Friday, April 30, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: mystical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 02 May 2010

Nice link to human existence

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Tomy Pop 04 May 2010

Are you refering to the resurrection idea of christianity where Christ dies on the cross and is resurrected. dying to the shore i am reborn in the sea for sea is my home... thank you for the ideas. you are very much poetic in your little poems

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Shirin Sheikhi 08 May 2010

+10 thank you for writing such nice piece

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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 May 2010

The sea is my home. By dying to the shore I enter my home........................in dynamics of nature everything goes by rise and fall by crest and trough in its time and space as specified by its own reason, wonderful write imagery and metaphors, quite metaphysical,10+++.thanks for sharing

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Anita Trivedi 11 May 2010

Its speechless..... so wel writen, so beautiful....... Great imagination.

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Lillian Thomas 16 August 2018

great imagery and wonderful imagination. I like the way you let us find our own meaning. Just the observation alone sparks a new way to see the shore.

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Sranisha Francis 18 September 2015

The sea is my home. By dying to the shore I enter my home. Hi, Tony, You are a free person.

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Bri Edwards 06 February 2014

i have some problems with this poem, but unless you ask, i may just not bother to mention them to you in detail. thanks for sharing. :) bri

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Unwritten Soul 06 August 2010

This one is so different but the value is priceless...so good! You missing somewhere u belong to, staying at middle of road, between ur 'place' and your present 'place' always make u in between...but dont u miss the ocean? How could u think to leave shore...In between, and so still u stay in both...and what i understand (another version) , for me, i refer this as a life, we now live as human and yet going older (and death) and reach to new home, which where we belong (life after death) ...earth and heaven? A lot of things can be translated by many ways from this philosophical poem! :) :)

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Mariette Singer 27 June 2010

dying i enter my home.its very nice phiolosophy thank you.

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