Dying Half Poem by Talia Felix

Dying Half

Rating: 4.3


My lonely star
my shallow mortal
and my treasuring friend

Time drifted us so far apart
making us lost
and cold in heart

Time has feared us all
and made you change
And making yourself take all the blame

Making me feel like u have hurt
which left u blind
and made me alert

You have been through pain
and i can so see
See what that did to u and me

Love has gotten in the way
and sometimes it does
left u empty all the time and everyday

My sister and my only love
How change has scared me
and made me dream up above

Dream of the day when u will return
dreaming of the day when our friendship never burnt

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 14 August 2009

Love has gotten in the way and sometimes it does left u empty all the time and everyday My sister and my only love How change has scared me and made me dream up above sure when someone is incomplete and looking for his /her second missing half to get and to be completed will think like that..and how you sweetly expressed the idea for painful half is really wonderful and heartfelt..inspired from this poem..liked it very much..well done

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 April 2008

its very nostalgic as well as tragic..................

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Vidyadhar ... 29 February 2008

A nice peice of work...........

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