Dyin Anyday Is Better Than This! ! ! ! *love Killa! ! *3333 Poem by Emily Sleator aka Katastrophic Kyte3 NopyGirrl

Dyin Anyday Is Better Than This! ! ! ! *love Killa! ! *3333

Rating: 2.8


I sewed my heart back together
Because it had frayed
I was drowning
While u were floatin
U were a fraud
But i couldnt see beneath
Ur suface
So mabey its my fault
U contained me
And n contact
We seemed to be unpenetrable
Descending into my grave
I curse those words
'i love you is eight letters so is Bullsh*t'
Pleeze however u kill me
It will be less painful than this
Put a gun to my head
And do the old BANG BANG!
Or put a blade to my wrist
And make me enjoy it! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Suffocate me til i dont wanna breath no more......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Innocent Angel* 07 February 2009

Nice emotions shown in the poem..really hurtful..

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Candace Quinton 07 February 2009

nice job hope u stay in this world

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Lynda Robson 09 February 2009

Emotional piece, thanks for sharing your feelings with us 10 Lyndax

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Tom Golding 08 February 2009

A sharing and emotional piece that no doubt many will relate to.

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Christine Kerr 08 February 2009

It's easy to see that you had to be there to show the feeling of giving up. Glad you know that your not alone so that we can share it with you.

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Keith Hendrickson 07 February 2009

wow another great piece. i loved the way you began and ended this piece. but overall top to bottom very nice

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Kerli Undead 07 February 2009

the emotion shows... well written, the emotion is deep... ~Kerli

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