Dusk (Haiku) Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Dusk (Haiku)

Rating: 2.5


The white milky way
Looking up I bend my neck
At one night time star

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sj Holland 03 July 2013

Joy, joy! 5-7-5. Beautiful. I actually felt my neck stretching backwards...and I saw that star, in my mind's eye.

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James McLain

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