Dusk Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Dusk

Rating: 3.5


And as quickly as the sun rises
I see it suddenly fall
The night sky, filling with stars, casts over me
I hear you say your final goodbye to me
As I feel the warmth of your body
Move away from me
And as you disappear into the darkness
I hope that one day
The sun will rise once again for us
So we won't end forever
In a hopeless
Wish

(written with help from Sarah Hohol)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry O'leary 25 June 2012

A nice flow of images from beginning to end... Terry

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Amy Marie 25 June 2012

Very short and sweet in such a way that fills my senses and gets its point across :)

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