Drunken Fate Poem by Aftab Alam

Drunken Fate

Rating: 4.8


Once I sat calmly
With my deep thought
Alone in a place, lonely
And started writing..
I lost my pen!
Again sat after dancing
Paper flew whither
Knew not!
I shouted, who is that?
With mirth whispered
I am your lost thought
With your drunken fate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 29 May 2013

very nice and very punchy.. love for the thought and construction...this is not an easy task..8

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R.j. Wynn 29 May 2013

Yes sir, I believe you because I been there, done that,

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