Drunk By My Self. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Drunk By My Self.

Rating: 4.5


well its just you and me
a bottle full of liquor,
one shot after another
as i begin to feel drunk even quicker,
suicide thoughts begin to run,
as i light up my cigarette
and load up my gun,
sad thoughts are runnin thru my mind,
i must search for answers and find,
should i go or should i stay,
and as my tears fall from my eyes
i begin to pray,
god have mercy on my soul,
god i beg for you to take control,
im rich but i feel poor,
this cant be life theres gotta be more,
i need to know whats on the other side of the door,
im on my knees
im beggin on the floor,
god didnt respond,
a few seconds later there was a loud sound,
the next day a body with a bible was found..


written sometime in 2008.
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 11 January 2009

that was sad..i guess the alcohol brought that end...but being a drinker and smoker myself i have never come to such decisions in their company...even rich people face aproblem..ther is a unfulfiled space whichif not driven by us will be driven by fear..10

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Genesis Learny 11 January 2009

a very touching and heartfelt poem. almost anyone can relate to this poem, going back to a time where they felt dead inside bringing it to the outside by engaging in risky behaviors.on the other side of the spectrum this poem represents the theory that there is a light at the end of the tunnel when there is someone who is there to save you.

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Ershad Mazumder 13 January 2009

Its really a very good poem.

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Matt Hartwell 13 January 2009

very good. those of us that can relate thank you for your poem and your boldness of putting it on the internet. thank you

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Ian Kennedy 15 January 2009

Thats heavy dude...good job

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Chamekka Jones 17 September 2009

I KNOW THAT PAIN! ! ! ! !

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Last hakkaobake 12 September 2009

I like it. sounds great in my mind and paints a dark tell, thanks 10

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Sans Serif 11 September 2009

Dark. I like a dark poem. The emotions through your head at the time must have been extreme. Keep that in mind when you write more. Love it.

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I$land Gurl 08 September 2009

Wow this was dark.... really deep..

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Killing Hope 08 September 2009

Dark and drunk, nice job.

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