Stevie Taite

Rookie (30th January 1973 / Kent, England)

Drunk and disorganised


I tried to write a poem
whilst drunk
I thunk and I thunk
which is hard when you're drunk
But all I could thunk
was how bladdered I were
And that probably
all of my stanza would slur

Submitted: Sunday, February 24, 2013

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  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (4/16/2013 8:56:00 AM)

    Saved to titter over my beer googles Friday Tuvm (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (4/16/2013 8:54:00 AM)

    Hahaha. I thunk this is bwilliamce! Lol I've done it so many times. Once had three reviews on a poem I'd never laid eyes on knowingly before. Found you by a poem written in your humour honour I see why now. Karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Owain Glyn (3/20/2013 3:52:00 PM)

    If a drink and a think becomes a drunk and a thunk, then I'm sunk! Love it! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,849 Points Kevin Patrick (3/5/2013 1:00:00 PM)

    If being drunk means you write something as funny as this, I might give up Al-Anon and join the rest of my family in AA, a very delightful read, candy is dandy but liquor is quicker. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,166 Points Thomas A Robinson (2/28/2013 6:18:00 PM)

    Ha ha...great...just great! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,894 Points Patricia Grantham (2/28/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    Dear Stevie, I truly enjoyed this poem. A good belly laugh (I thunk and I thunk) . Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,894 Points Patricia Grantham (2/28/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Dear Stevie, I truly enjoyed this poem. A good belly laugh (I thunk and I thunk) . Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 429 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (2/25/2013 11:48:00 PM)

    I'm sure you have written this poem when organised ! The words- I thunk and I thunk captured me! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 56 Points Jahan Zeb (2/25/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    Hahahahaha. a nice try to call back the conditions and write this piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 36 Points Sandy Player (2/25/2013 8:06:00 AM)

    And they ask me why i live life straight edge... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (2/25/2013 7:39:00 AM)

    nicely penned.the message is never try to write a poem when we are drunk.~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (2/25/2013 5:54:00 AM)

    haha a difficult task to write when you either high or drunk, nice piece (Report) Reply

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