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Stevie Taite

Rookie (30th January 1973 / Kent, England)

Drunk and disorganised


I tried to write a poem
whilst drunk
I thunk and I thunk
which is hard when you're drunk
But all I could thunk
was how bladdered I were
And that probably
all of my stanza would slur

Submitted: Sunday, February 24, 2013

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  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (4/16/2013 8:54:00 AM)

    Hahaha. I thunk this is bwilliamce! Lol I've done it so many times. Once had three reviews on a poem I'd never laid eyes on knowingly before. Found you by a poem written in your humour honour I see why now. Karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Owain Glyn (3/20/2013 3:52:00 PM)

    If a drink and a think becomes a drunk and a thunk, then I'm sunk! Love it! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,391 Points Kevin Patrick (3/5/2013 1:00:00 PM)

    If being drunk means you write something as funny as this, I might give up Al-Anon and join the rest of my family in AA, a very delightful read, candy is dandy but liquor is quicker. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Jahan Zeb (2/25/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    Hahahahaha. a nice try to call back the conditions and write this piece. (Report) Reply

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