Drunk And Disorganised Poem by Stevie Taite

Drunk And Disorganised

Rating: 4.8


I tried to write a poem
whilst drunk
I thunk and I thunk
which is hard when you're drunk
But all I could thunk
was how bladdered I were
And that probably
all of my stanza would slur

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelvin Owusu 25 February 2013

haha a difficult task to write when you either high or drunk, nice piece

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Nader Baheri 25 February 2013

nicely penned.the message is never try to write a poem when we are drunk.~nb

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Sandy Player 25 February 2013

And they ask me why i live life straight edge...

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Jahan Zeb 25 February 2013

Hahahahaha. a nice try to call back the conditions and write this piece.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 25 February 2013

I'm sure you have written this poem when organised ! The words- I thunk and I thunk captured me!

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Joe Hughes 25 November 2021

I think you dun gud

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 June 2016

you have expressed dramatically in words the feeling and the experience of being drunk...... thank you. very nice poem. you have conveyed what you really wanted to convey. tony

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Karen Sinclair 16 April 2013

Saved to titter over my beer googles Friday Tuvm

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Karen Sinclair 16 April 2013

Hahaha. I thunk this is bwilliamce! Lol I've done it so many times. Once had three reviews on a poem I'd never laid eyes on knowingly before. Found you by a poem written in your humour honour I see why now. Karen

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Owain Glyn 20 March 2013

If a drink and a think becomes a drunk and a thunk, then I'm sunk! Love it!

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