Drugs Ain'T Cool... Poem by shweta advani

Drugs Ain'T Cool...

Rating: 5.0


I know u like partying
n having fun..
but y u want to walk
the path of self annihiliation..

Getting high hmm....
ur best bet is dope..
but my best bet is hope...

I know there wud b problems n pains
n losses n gains...
but y to rely on chemicals
to work on ur brain...

U r a creator's dream
An angel's child...
U r meant to win over
problems big or mild...

Y walk on a path
of self destruction
N wait to quit
till u reach rock bottom...

Drugs ain't cool...
Don't be a fool...

Drugs n life
have nothin in common
not even a single alphabet
I know u wanted nirvana
but this is not the step
in right direction..
Drugs don't deserve u baby
so get over its addiction..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 10 May 2009

A powerful and well written message. You are right drugs aint cool, they destroy. 10++

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Vinod Ak 11 May 2009

splendid poem to spread a great message! these make cool lyrics for a great song on this message! awesome! 10++++++

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Ramesh T A 11 May 2009

Well said about drug route to nirvana! Materialism is not but spiritualism is the way to total liberation. Nice to read!

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Subroto Chatterjee 11 May 2009

Drugs are an escape which never should've happened...Life is intoxicating enough...! ! Thanks for the message. Cheers. Subroto

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Muhammad Ali 11 May 2009

Very lovely positive work Shweta! i like it 10..

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Siddharth Singh 19 July 2009

Thought provoking indeed, a 10.

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Anjali Sinha 18 July 2009

nice poem hope all youngsters listening to you -10 anjali

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Kesav Easwaran 18 May 2009

Good poem with a strong message given out in soft inspiring words...the lines in the fourth stanza i liked most in this write...10

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a very positive write...drug really kills...the flight they board would'nt land smoothly great work done by not focussing on the negative aspect alone

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Abhilash Fraizer 12 May 2009

full of postive energy. i salute the good soul reverberating behind the words. brilliant!

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