*drowning In Love Poem by George BernardBloodyShaw

*drowning In Love

Rating: 2.7


Love is a whirl
a beautiful swirl
in which to drown,
an immersion,
t'would be the crown
with no diversion
to top a life
to have found
around
that friend and lover
to cover
all that would abound
let's drown together
as with a tether
just love and never
bother what's around....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 04 December 2012

No need to drown, love. With the cut frozen over you'd just bounce off the ice..... Come on, GBBS, let's have some more of your poetry. It's been a long wait. Fran xxxx

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Sally Plumb Plumb 17 July 2010

You seem very happy and content.Lucky.

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Sid John Gardner. 16 July 2010

Just hope the crew are still around to enjoy daylight and not blowing bubbles through a weighted sack...lol Happy days GBBS. Sid.

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Sid John Gardner. 16 July 2010

Nice sentiments Mr GBBS.I know what you mean. Sid.

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