Drowning Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Drowning

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I knew about drowning
Long before love taught me:
Eyes, nose, mouth filled with water,
Holding my breath
Until lungs screamed for air
and my pulse crashed in my ears
Like breakers on a rocky shore.
From one near-drowning I feared deep water
And took until I was a teen to learn to swim.
And so it was with love:
One kiss and I knew
How close to drowning love was.
Should I take the plunge?

Monday, February 15, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sina Farajzadeh 17 November 2012

Great work. Nice similes. Liked it. Best wishes

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Sally Plumb Plumb 15 November 2012

Some of us dive in head first.

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