Drowning Poem by Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Drowning

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You say you love me
This i know is true
though it is rarely shown by you
It's not something you hear
and then believe
You feel it flowing through you

You're so confused about your life
your commitments overshadowing your light
which radiates from you almost no more
Getting lost in your dreams
Pulling you below the sea
Keeps you under water
And still you say you're loving me?


19 August 2004

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 12 September 2005

Powerful poem. Nice one. Sincerely, Mary

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A Harrie 08 September 2005

very sad thoughtful write, nicely done Amanda

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Theorem Thetruthserum 08 September 2005

Nice...sounds like a similar situation that my friend was in.

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Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

East London, South Africa
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