Drowning Poem by ally lira

Drowning



i put my foot in,
in felt so nice.

i wasin in a little,
enjoyed the cold.

then i went waist deep,
it caught my breath.

decided to swim,
it felt refreshing.

now im drowning!
i lost control!

dont let me drown
i beg you please!

grab my arm
and rescue me!

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Jose Campos 10 August 2008

this poem its so........so brilent i love it and i love u

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