Drown Poem by Sasha Julia

Drown

Rating: 5.0


I live my life through verse,
It's sad, but I could do worse,
If I'd lived my life through you
It would be gone well and true,

You said I shouldn't waste my time
Wanting what couldn't be mine,
You told me to find another thing to do
And not mess around trying to get you,

You broke my heart
And made me cry,
I wasn't being smart,
You showed me why,

Sometimes when I loose my head
I remember what you said,
When you told me, speaking true
That there could never be me and you,

When you did condemn me to this feeling rife,
I cried a thousand million tears, I was such a lowlife,

But now I wish,
In my anguish
That I could have saved those tears of my condemn
And drowned you in them.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted M 05 August 2009

Emotional write in excellent rhyme.10+++

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Siddharth Singh 05 August 2009

Good to see you gathering yourself back from the heartbreak, by the end of the poem. Nice work.

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Chanelle Williams 05 August 2009

ilove 'rhyming poems' thats totally my thing. Yours is very cool, i might say i totally spend hours writing new poems every day lol well not hours, just like here and there from time to time haha slapp bakk Chanelle Williams Ps; sorry about my randomness

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