Drops Of Shame Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Drops Of Shame

Rating: 5.0


In this tradition of hypocrisy,
Rich sea of shams,
Virtue hides behind sanctimony,
Watch dogs are drooling at the prize,
The sins dine on a golden platter,
Simplicity lies shattered,
Truth bound in iron chains,
Chained to the legs of blind rats
Love lives in schools
Patience in monastery
Compassion in the books
Innocence is lost at birth
Sex is sold for ego
Lust is sold for cents
Honesty lies six feet below the ground
Farmers weep, worms they reap
There is no beauty beyond makeup
It is December before June
Racism hides below the skin
Friendship wears a pacemaker
Children are born out of mistakes
Freedom grins in an invisible cage
Greed rules the day
The saints don’t have a say
Bitter is the sweat on failure’s skin
Death dwells in denial
Beyond this and that
In this empty world
There is nothing more
And nothing less
Of course Other than shame,
Drops of shame drops of shame.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 22 January 2009

This poem gets to the roots of all ills the soceity is suffering from. A compact composition with elegant flow of thoughts. A 10

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 26 January 2009

A different work from a romantic poet Your canvas seems to have widened Another beautiful creation from a promising poet

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Alison Cassidy 28 January 2009

Wow! You offer the reader such a cynical view of the world - but penned with skill and a great feeling for language. You take hypocrisy (which you obviously abhor) and you give it a severe shaking in this strongly worked poem that is written from lots of bitter experience, I suspect. Some excellent metaphors stand out in this well written poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 28 January 2009

yeah majority of people are hypocrites. The word personality come from greek word persona means mask. Everyone lives with mask. And those who sheds mask are poisoned or gunned down....... Wonderful Write

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Eddie Roa 05 February 2009

You speak of the human condition. Sad but true. stirring verse. Thanks for sharing

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Anand Madhukar 18 September 2009

A very different write from what I've read of you so far, both in flavour and the style. A bit cynical but nevertheless an honest commentary on our times when truth lies shackled in iron chains and the sun is made of a cloud of lies...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 May 2009

Nice poem with marvelous ending.

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Dr Yogesh Sharma 24 February 2009

a great poem but sadly a true comment on indian secularism and social justice mark drama. dr yogesh sharma.

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Original Unknown Girl 10 February 2009

Interesting poem, so much imagery I felt drowned in it. Worth a second read. HG: -) xx

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Joseph Poewhit 09 February 2009

Your very right in many points and truths BUT, there is the other side of the coin to. We don't see it when looking at one side.It remains hidden.

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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