Drifted Away... Poem by Khairul Ahsan
Drifted Away...
I wanted to give her a sky,
She opted for just pieces of cloud,
Some patches of soft, white cloud,
In the azure sky. When given, she hid
Herself behind the clouds, and thus,
Right before my two eyes,
Rode away in a graceful glide,
Slowly drifting away, to obscurity!
Dhaka
14 March 2014
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people who choose to drift away from our lives are indeed like passing clouds when we think about them often times...........short n sweet
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4/19/2024 10:46:21 PM # 1.0.0.1119
This poem has a very unique set up. I like the way it flows and the first line is a real attention grabber. It's a very romantic piece.
Thanks for appreciating the poem, particularly the first line, which you said 'is a real attention grabber'. Much inspired by your kind and appreciative words, @Sky Welch.