Khairul Ahsan


Drifted Away...


I wanted to give her a sky,
She opted for just a cloud,
A patch of soft, white cloud,
In the azure sky. Then, she hid
Herself behind it, and with it,
Right before my two eyes,
Rode away in a graceful glide,
Slowly drifting away, to obscurity!


Dhaka
14 March 2014
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Submitted: Thursday, March 13, 2014
Edited: Monday, March 31, 2014

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  • Sky Welch (3/24/2014 7:27:00 PM)

    This poem has a very unique set up. I like the way it flows and the first line is a real attention grabber. It's a very romantic piece. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (3/14/2014 1:19:00 PM)

    Some reader has just rated this poem 1/10. No comment on his judgement. He is the 3rd reader to rate this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (3/14/2014 1:57:00 AM)

    people who choose to drift away from our lives are indeed like passing clouds when we think about them often times...........short n sweet (Report) Reply

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