Dried Thoughts Poem by Edgar Andrade Baguio

Dried Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


An hour and a half has ended
Your sleepy, melodic voice faded,
From the silence of the night
In its candid tone, pure and bright,
Still hear it as I showered before bed
Hoping to wash a memory from my head,
I tried to shampoo and rinse it away
But it feels more like a cold wind in May,

Then it became frozen thoughts of you
Hard to melt by the hot drizzles in view,
Strangely enough I enjoyed it though
Even if it isn’t really perfectly true,
For you are just like a dream so nice
Well in fact too kind to be a dry ice!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theany Ouy 26 May 2010

Very insightful, love the title also. A very profound expression for another. Lovely piece. Thank you for sharing.. T

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 October 2008

A very nice poem, love it. 10+

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Tj Becker 20 September 2008

For you are just like a dream so nice Well in fact too kind to be a dry ice! - those two lines made me laugh, what a great poem this was. You had great rhyme and flow in this one as well. I enjoy your works.

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Aijaz Asif 19 September 2008

another beautiful write with nice rhymes...thabks

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Manonton Dalan 17 September 2008

napintas toy daniw mo manong. ngem anya ar-aramidem ta tsina. hmmmmm.. just same name. sorry

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Edgar Andrade Baguio

Edgar Andrade Baguio

Lapu-Lapu City, Cebu
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