Dreaming Of You Poem by Some Girl

Dreaming Of You

Rating: 4.6


Sitting alone
with nothing to do
my mind starts to dance
as i picture you.

you as a friend
then becoming my life
you are always there
adding sparks to my life

when i think of you
i know what my dreams hold
that they cannot be bought
with any ounce of gold

a trust i know
you'll never break
a love i know
you'll never fake

i ask you once ~
maybe twice
can you answer
and be my life?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fritzgerald Paul 10 April 2007

it's an excellent poem

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Anita Blake 10 April 2007

i love this poem, great poem

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Khairul Ahsan 12 January 2014

A nice poem that has come out as a result of dreaming. The feelings expressed here are all too known to whoever has ever been 'In Love'. A well written poem.

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Paul R. Wilson 23 August 2013

It reminds me of the past... oh good times! Anyway, you've done some good stuff and this'ne has got me wanting to read the rest. I wish I was as comfortable with sharing my work as you.

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without a name Face 01 September 2011

yes, I often have this feeling.... daydreaming about it..... thinking about them..... but you portray it well. Keep it up.

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without a name Face 01 September 2011

yes, I often have this feeling.... daydreaming about it..... thinking about them..... but you portray it well. Keep it up.

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Chad Fisher 30 June 2007

Such an inspirational tone. This is so far my favorite poem of your collection.

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