Dreaming Need Poem by Lonnie Hicks

Dreaming Need

Rating: 2.8


I lay down my heart for you
useless, beat-less
it will be
if you do not come back to me.

My eyes too
I'll place in my treasure box
I have no need to see
another,
ever.

No need now for locomotion
I lie stlll
having no destination
if that destination
does not include
you.

My brain succumbs
to hiatus;
no need for new thoughts;
the last and only one I need
is of you.

My beauty rose
withers
when placed beside your photograph.

I see sun-beams in my room
but notice only the dust motes
not the beams' beauty.

Auditorily
I hear only the silence
of Deepest Need.

I am lost,
to be saved
only by a miracle;
your voice close
to my ear:
saying
'I am here
you were having a dream.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 12 October 2009

Lonnie, Your passion for Miss Dream, expressed variously, is irrepressibly palpable, as well as infectious. What a wonder are dreams! Full of eerie fantasies, with inexplicable turns, with the past-present-future concocted into a single unique tense – all for free! No rental, no ticket, no fuel costs! Most of the dreams we don’t remember, but whatever little remains in the memory, it distils into beautiful poetry, if only we care. Naturally, for this dreamy fare, you get your #10.

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