Dream Poem by Green Eyes

Dream

Rating: 4.5


Dream
I just close my eyes and put my hand on my heart
To remember you..... to remember your smile
Trying to see your face in my dream

Dream... Dream is just dream not real like i want... like my heart wants

Its so hard to live without you but its
The time that i must keep on trying

Trying to keep your face in my eyes and near of my heart

Today i saw you
I hold you
I kissed you and you kissed me
Im happy and unhappy in the same time

Cos all that in my dream.... just in my dream

Oh how i miss you
How im longing to see your green eyes
Longing to see your smiling face
And longing to take your kisses

I just can say that my love for you is still alive in my heart
Now and forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 05 August 2006

There is something in this line that is so moving, hard for me to define The poem complete is beautiful also Well done Love duncan X

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Uriah Hamilton 05 August 2006

This feel like true love, what lovely honesty! ! ! Uriah

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Aashish Ameya 07 May 2007

you know whats good about your poems that there is a innocecy in to it....keep writing

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Re'Twon Scott 10 January 2007

i really love dis poem u really but your thoughts and emotions n dis poem. its hot really it blew me off to the block. great job

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Shane Markie 18 August 2006

Family is everything. Shane

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Aj Cliff 07 August 2006

hey i really liked this poem reminds me of a special person i once loved i love it! : D xXx

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GreenEyes- Amor 05 August 2006

really i wrote this poem to my brother bc i lived with him all my life and i love him so much but he travelled to another country so i cant see him but he s always in my heart and in my dream

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