Louis Cecile

Rookie - 5 Points (London)

Dream state


I live in a world of dreams

Unseen not been

My thoughts provide a place to hide unseen

From the world become I light

Remain in light the eagle takes flight

I am the world to increase my might

What is real, who can reveal

Confusion decrease my sight

Do I wake up each day or dream in dismay

Are real people walking my way

Totally lost the purpose is done

Life and my dreams are now one

Submitted: Saturday, January 09, 2010

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Comments about this poem (Dream state by Louis Cecile )

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/18/2011 1:40:00 AM)

    A state or gesture of dreams in motion...like a movie..well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Dave Dafes (3/8/2011 5:13:00 AM)

    I love this poem about dreams... Life can't be separated from dream... nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,720 Points Kee Thampi (1/16/2010 2:51:00 AM)

    thanks
    is real, who can reveal

    Confusion decrease my sight

    Do I wake up each day or dream in dismay
    keep it promises
    keethampi (Report) Reply

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