Dream Six Feet Under Poem by joshua daukei

Dream Six Feet Under

Rating: 2.5


Bounded down
Six feet under ground
There’s noting around
Hardly a sound
“Thump thump thump”
Heart beats fast
Air turns to gas
Choking now
Wake up in bed
Just a dream
Or so it seemed
Drift away
Awake in a box
All is black
And you’re bounded down
Six feet under ground

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 09 August 2011

Wow! Impressive, Joshua, I can imagine dreaming Six under water, it must be a very wet dream! A very well penned and poignant poem that clearly shows your poetic talent! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your fantastic writes! If time permits, please, read and enjoy my poem titled: DREAMS (Not under water) God Bess Your for always! Love and Peace, Romeo from New York City! ...

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loNeLY AnGel 10 April 2010

nice poem... me likey

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Stephen Magill 20 May 2009

really good flow, great poem.

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Amelie peace 20 May 2009

I'm claustrophobic...that would truly be an awful nightmare....but very good description! Great write. 10++ ^_^

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