Dream's Atmosphere Poem by Patricia Gale
Dream's Atmosphere
Upon the gentle waves of invisible air
I send my touch to my love
His lips and skin so fair
Our feelings as pure as a snow white dove
He walks the path of my mind
Reminding me there is one who cares
When the heart is low and tears do fall it is him who I find
Sweetly and softly calling my name taking me away from these worldly affairs
Fingers gently slide around my cheek then through my hair
Hands of tenderness but strength caressing me
His soul shinning from within his eyes
Opening my mind and I know he is near
With my eyes closed and my heart wide open … lost in a dream’s’ atmosphere
Beautiful poem this Patricia heaps of feeling and tender emotions congratulations
You got the feel and the mood just right for this one, Well written.
That last line is a stunner. Those of us who are lucky enough to know what you mean... know what you mean. t x
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