Dream Number 4 (Love) Poem by Smoky Hoss

Dream Number 4 (Love)

Rating: 5.0


Lying together upon a grassy knoll
we watch the wind blow our stars past the moon,
we hold tight, as if not to would bring a death,
though I know it will end, and all too soon.
All that now matters is us, and the feeling
that we finally got it right,
even blind hearts can see, this may very well be
lifes only perfect night.
It is so hard to find love in a dark-n-stormy world
where the days are a sad and lonely way,
so take my hand, and I'll give my heart
stay here as long as you can...
together tonight, we'll keep the storm at bay.

Saturday, December 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 06 February 2015

Love is the best thing in the world, a great poem.

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Patti Masterman 20 January 2015

A beautiful piece. Captured all the fragility of being in a body and trying to spend a lifetime of love, in however much time one is given..

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Dee Corpolongo 18 January 2015

Very moving and emotional poem. Brought tears to my eyes. True Love. ♥

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Dee Corpolongo 18 January 2015

This was such a moving and emotion-filled poem. It brought tears to my eyes. Bravo.

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Valerie Dohren 07 January 2015

Lovely write Smoky - a plea for love which we all need.

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