Dream Lost In Fogs Poem by Sahar Sahar

Dream Lost In Fogs



My dreams,
lost in miseries,
dancing before my eyes,
In my virtual,
blurred, opaque,
and fogged mirror,
blended with memories,
haunting all the times,
taking me to farsighted,
unkind fates,
and in plastic bags,
life is packed,
with deceit,
futile and claimed emotions,
displayed in crystal closets,
with sparkly false diamonds,
deceptively smiling faces,
offering love,
for fire of treachery,
facing candlelight,
drifting from day to day,
loosing in nights.
running with escaping speed,
hope got lost finally.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 14 December 2009

awesome and I agree with the remarks of nazli and say..yes this poem has some how pictographic effects to touch hearts and souls.. your way of writing here is fantsies type and the way you expressed is pretty intersting and seems professionally done.. you are doing a good job and the make up of verese and links between them is wonderful.. well done sahar sahar dear..10/10

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Rehana Nazli 03 October 2009

Refocus and visualise new dreams...life goes on with renewed hopes and aspirations.

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