Dream Ku Poem by Linda Ori

Dream Ku

Rating: 4.1


Somnolent screenplay
rehearsal for waking life -
Pre-reality

Thoughts in utero
waiting for delivery
to the outside world

Subconscious scanning
vivid life inside the mind -
Creative planning

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 18 September 2006

Thoughts in utero...... hmmmmm Linda... it amazes.... your mind.... the odes and sonnets that you delivered... indeedly vivid!

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William Jackson 18 September 2006

Original thought provoking poem. I suppose at an elemental level a new life in the womb is completely in touch with contentment and yet senses that there is another part of mother awaiting outside the womb to cradle baby with her arms.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 September 2006

Midnight...You 'KU it just right....' Tis a lovely write...''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 September 2006

A lovely and well-delivered little piece! Excellent!

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Alison Cassidy 24 September 2006

Love this Dream KU. Fascinating images expertly rendered love Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Not a member No 4 27 January 2007

It's like another life in there, another world. Like especially the birthing metaphor. Highly compressed, crisp and poetic delivery of these ideas Linda. xx

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Robert Howard 15 January 2007

Very imagistic and well structured. The mind set applies to so many situation where action will follow in due time.

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Duncan Wyllie 05 November 2006

The embers of thought burning slow and in tune with life Thankyou love duncan X

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Anna Russell 02 October 2006

Clever, creative and beautifully crafted. Hugs Anna xxx

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Gregory Gunn 01 October 2006

Ku-dos for these haiku! I shall certainly raise a mug of can't miss ku-miss to the ku-ragious effort put forth by Ms. Ori. All right, that's enough of the punning around for now. GWG

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